HMD- How's My Flying!?

HMF

How's my Flying??

This is the first time I've played Finch and since he is still a developing character it can be a bit hard to play him. So am I doing okay? Am I doing great? Terribly? Bird? Too many bird puns?

Anyways you can tell all of them and more to me here. Anon is on and screened, and IP logging is off, so feel free to send critics my way.

If you would like to contact me in any other form, you can do so through these lines:
Plurk: ectobiology
MSN: striders @ live.com
Gmail: apotatohat @ gmail.com
AIM: apotatohat